Fun, funny
Liked it. It had the CC charm and silly style I have grown fond of.
I liked the Mars bar joke and the selection of music.
Didn't like the loop at the end much, though, it looks lousy, seeing the spaceship fall back each time.
Fun, funny
Liked it. It had the CC charm and silly style I have grown fond of.
I liked the Mars bar joke and the selection of music.
Didn't like the loop at the end much, though, it looks lousy, seeing the spaceship fall back each time.
Yeah I got lazy with the spaceship =3
Good but mixed
Art/animation Mixed quality
3D angles/ perspective mixed up but good effort
Ideas Good
Text not very good english
Don't like the title. Sh1tty is spelt thus anyway
Music options good
Yes I don't like the titel either. If you have a better one? ;)
And yes I am dislectic. ;'(
But what do you mean with mixed quality?
OK, quite funny
simple but effective
Speek/speak.
Women!
This is SO right! You can't win! Yeah! just like that!
Beautifully done.
Good art
Good animation
Good sound
Its all good
I wouldn't change it!
There is a tradition on NG...
...whereby if you are the final voter, the 200th person, who gets the 'Saviour' video when the movie is protected, that you review it... So I will.
It shows some potential with a little humour and theres noting wrong with what little there was, but really there is not much to it. You should have submitted a small collection of them or made this one longer. It is not really as described in your notes as there is only a single sprite. It would be much better if you told people what to do to prevent this catastrophe occuring- a humourous, imaginary anti-virus program would be OK, watch it splat the wizard guy.
I always feel a little embarassed when I am told I am the Saviour when I actually blammed something- Well I gave it 1/5 and I think you know you were lucky to scrape through. If I were a statwhore I would have voted 0 and I might have made all the difference.
Anyhow you made it- count yourselves lucky and please make the rest of the series with a bit more time, patience and effort.
There is nothing wrong with Flash MX, I never use any of the features of Flash 8! GEt some experience now on NG. Get some inspiration and read some of the tutorials here as well. Come back with length, style, detail, story, humour and proper credits. then watch your scores rise!
Best Wishes,
Ice
Because its in spanish...
... I don't understand it very well. It certainly would be nice if you could put in English subtitles or just some kind of introduction would help.
However, I can see that the art is OK and so is the small amount of animation. It has length and appears to have some kind of story.
It was good enough for me to watch all of it and WANT, at least to understand it.
Mainly I have written this review, though, to counteract the unreasonably poor review score it has in general.
OK stuff
I don't really go for Phoenix Wrong stuff and I don't usually watch it here, but I saw it was MEK so I thought I'd check it out.
It's good enough of its type and it is as described- random.
I couldn't quite hear all of it, but that didn't seem to matter much!
Sorry if my scores don't help your totals- I can only vote as I see, but at least I can know I helped protect it through judgement, which it certainly deserves.
Best Wishes,
IceDragon64 of the Dragons & Spirits
I trust you WONT end here!
This is very good, vastly improved. there is so much story to tell. I will study the series in detail and PM you the text edits, as requested- So far I haven't spotted any, but I will go over it a few times and explore the extras too.
9/10- but its still a stick movie and its not all that original a plot, yet. The quality of the whole series will depend on where you take us with the story now.
Well done.
Ice
Thank you
Better and better
Its getter hard to resist. I don't like stick men much but... what can I do... my hand is hovering between 4 and 5!
We need some explanation of why the General and Romanov have come on an expedition so dangerous that one guy has already said the 20 soldiers will not come back from- surely?
I personally would have had helicopter sounds faintly in the background as the hc's were heading out to the castle, fainly behind the music.
Still not quite right with the text
MUCH better than 1 and 2
Got length
Got story
This is what you get when you collaborate to get the best out of people.
Shame its stickmen really, the rest of the art is SO good.
The subtitles are not quite right. If you would like me to edit them PM me.
Best Wishes,
Ice
Was in the Dragon & Spirit Alliance. My DS Halloween & Christmas Quizzes are in the 2006 Collections. I was the main organiser on Wikigrounds, though I don't spend much time either there or here these days. I was a writer in the Monthly Writing and VACcom
Age 60, Male
Writer
London, UK
Joined on 9/29/05