OK
Tried twice to hear what you said to SBC but couldn't. the music is a bit too loud and your voice is not as clear as SBC's in this.
Otherwise, OK random CD stuff.
Best Wishes,
Ice
OK
Tried twice to hear what you said to SBC but couldn't. the music is a bit too loud and your voice is not as clear as SBC's in this.
Otherwise, OK random CD stuff.
Best Wishes,
Ice
Good. Funny
Its all good. Liked the video camera effects.
I also liked the 'your ticking again' bit- I remember being anxious about submissions, myself, and getting distracrted when I'm supposed to be animating. In my case I do research for my quizzes and get lost exploring Wikipedia!
Its got some nice touches. I was actually hoping it really was a movie describing the Lock Legion- is there one you would reccomend?
Best Wishes to the LL from the Dragons & Spirits
IceDragon64
Ah, sorry for the late response... but hopefully I can explain things about the Lock Legion with an upcoming flash. Lock Day is May 26th, and it'll be out then. Thank you for such positive comments and feedback!
OK
I don't have anything special to say about this- its a bit funny and its well enough animated etc.
Really I just cant resist that statment that no-one else has reviewed it and there's an author out there waiting to see what people have to say- I know how it feels!
Seriously, I think you could have put a few more ideas in, it would have made me vote higher if you had-
maybe things to eat or places to go or things to see. After all, if BW clocks seal is intact, then he's never been drunk before!
- but like I said, its OK.
At least you had proper credits, which a lot of people don't bother with in shorts.
Best Wishes & Happy New Year to the Clock Crew from the Dragons & Spirits
Ice
Nice one!
+ art/style Ok
+ good animation
+ funny
+Ok extras
fun thing. Saw you in NG com news so I thought Id check out your stuff.
Ice
Replay button!
+Ok art
+OK simple animation
+OK sound
+funny
-Needs replay button!
-Credits
Sorry I can't protect this...
I guess Im throwing away BP points but for what its worth...
+a little humour
+ quite quick off the mark (but not the first, nor as good)
+ some interesting choices of pictures, hinting at a moments thought and understanding
messy, misspelt and basically just a slideshow. Ive seen much worse.
for the record, although I have little doubt that he was responsible for atrocities and should have been punished severely for genocide, like many dictators, he did many good things for his country at first, especially education, and will (unfortunately) be idolised and martyred by those in his country who wanted a strong leader to stand up for thier cause.
thanks for the long and helpful review.
weird, random, funny
+ gogd graphics
+ OK animation
+ funny
Is this based on a real show? If so, maybe show something fromt he show- photos website, whatever.
Very good
+very good graphics, plenty of detail.
+Good animation, inc lip sync
+Good story
-who exactly are you guys? did I miss something- was there a web link or info button there?
-The credits need to either slow down or use a clearer font. Some people really do want to know who did what- you used your own songs, which is not that common on NG and you should be proud of it!
-the song goes on way after the end, which is a shame cos its a good song, but its a bit lame just having it playing to a nearly black screen. All the more reason to slow down the credits and maybe put in a little credits animation/action. Besides which, a little more buttons and info/deleted scenes can never hurt, if people don't want to see it they don't have to and it may tip the balance into a higher score.
Was in the Dragon & Spirit Alliance. My DS Halloween & Christmas Quizzes are in the 2006 Collections. I was the main organiser on Wikigrounds, though I don't spend much time either there or here these days. I was a writer in the Monthly Writing and VACcom
Age 61, Male
Writer
London, UK
Joined on 9/29/05