Not too bad
Not enough to it for my taste.
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untill/ until
Not too bad
Not enough to it for my taste.
spelling:
untill/ until
NO, NO, what am I doing?
I'm protecting' random stickmen fighting...
...again. Thats the third time this week.
I didn't think I would ever do this, but this is actually really good. It goes in my favourites!
"Who else wants some?" needs a question mark.
This obviously has some details and real humour, exporing Matrix parody etc. and the crazy smashed moon thing. You might consider putting in scene selecters (although I personally think they are pointless, other people like them and you do have defincate separate scenes in it. If you created more developed backgrounds you might get higher scores too and make this a real top scoring Flash.
Thank you
Funny
I liked the final message- tipped the balance into 8/10!
OK for a pilot
Finish it to that standard and I will pass it at least 2/5.
I don't pass pilot/test/previews Tom asks us not to submit them. 0/5
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there/their owners
LOL, fair enough
NO, NO, what am I doing?
...I am protecting a stickman fight!
Because it is the best i've ever seen. It has highest quality hand to hand fighting and a few subtle details, like the stick flying out and back into his hand, that make it protectable.
I like the little scene windows, they give it that extra that takes it beyond the thousands we get on NG.
You have the skills, if you gave it story/point then it could get a really good score.
However, as it stands I can only give up to 2/5 for a stickfight.
Looks good...
finish it to this standard and I will pass it.
Until then, don't submit trailers any more. Go to alphas
0/5
Hell yeah!
Kewl. Funny LOL.
Difficult to vote/review
I usually avoid Star Syndicate because they put in such crap with the good stuff. I don't aprove of a system which pushes crap through judgement.
todays Dailytoon is a good example.
Taylor Bortners work is very good and I would almost pass it on its own, though it doesn't really have a point/conclusion.
The rest were just rubbish and I would give them 0/5.
Having said all that, the Dailytoon graphics look very good and the Star Syndicate deserve the credit for a lot of work.
Dragons & Spirits judge only on Merit and despite the above comments I will always pass any Dailytoon which I think overall deserves to stay on NG.
we have an obligation to use any and all toons that get sent to us. we obviously cant have all flashes like taylor's every single day.
NO, NO, what am I doing?
I just protected a stickman fight!
Only just, though
+variety
+humour (4 is high for me)
+detail, background of a sort and reasonable sound
See if you can make the blood look better than the usual scribble
-No credits
-poor background
-some of the sounds don't seem right
-too abrupt end
Ok random stuff
It would be nice if you put in a little button at the end taking us to a page of info, such as who Copernicus really was, when he lived etc. along with any credits and a replay button.
4/10 2/5
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