OK
Spellings:
intense
species
Anihilated
OK
Spellings:
intense
species
Anihilated
Tnx Ill EDIT them Mistakes... thanks 4 the review mate ^^
OK stuff if you like Sonic
It would be nice for people like me who don't know these characters etc if you had an introduction to tell us a bit about the characters and story. Just a button to press and a couple of paragraphs and pictures. It would enable you to get beyond just showing bits of a computer game and into your own animation and style. You could even narate it and get more sound points
The last time I played Sonic he just rushed across a screen picking up rings, so these characters and emeralds mean nothing to me.
Difficult to vote/review
My heart says give this 10/10 but I am commited to voting on merit and as a Flash animation it is not exactly Chluiad.
You did a good piece of work and dashed it off at this vital moment, which is admirable and anti-war people should support you, but please do work on it and make it as good as you can
the Authors notes: 'may contain...' should read 'contains'. The final picture is about as horrific as it gets and viewers should be totally prepared for this.
I remember Nena's original version of that song and we were so inspired by it. I am so glad to hear another generation still inspired by it.
Well done and thank you
OK
needs credits, otherwise OK.
Music: Chronicles of Narnia.
Everything else: Me.
BBQBeefBurguerMan pic: BBQBeefBurguerMan
I don' t protect unfinished work but...
... it looks very good. I look forward to its completion.
Ok
give it sounds
sort out the spelling
No sound... like my other spiderman movie it was just kinda like a music video... but maybe my third one will have sound. Anyways thanks for the review
Basically I totally back Conejo assesino
It s a good start and good enough to stay on NG.
Best of luck keep at it.
Difficult to vote/review
I am relieved to find that this is a real episode, not just a twenty second preview thing.
Obviously the fact that it has proper art and story put it above a bare pass, but...
comicbook text and no sound effects limit what I could give it for sound and lack of real, walking etc. limit the appeal of the graphics.
It gets ever harder to find new ideas for stories and I hope you will really keep trying to fidn that original spark.
This has potential, please continue to put your best efforts into the series and I am sure this will be reflected in your scores.
borderline
I don't honestly think much of these burger Flashes, I don't understand the appeal, but I respect the fact that others do and you cater for their humour- I can see that they are reasonably well put together, of their type.
The way the womans face changes after the fart was funny.
The spelling could do with a bit more effort
decicated/dedicated familys/families
Well english is still not my first languane,so i may have some spelling issues ok.
OK stuff, funny
nothing wrong. Liked it
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