Aaaaah!
MUSHY!
I hope she realises how lucky she is!
Its great! Its funny
I wish some girl felt that much for me.
Aaaaah!
MUSHY!
I hope she realises how lucky she is!
Its great! Its funny
I wish some girl felt that much for me.
Difficult to vote/review
You have put a lot of thought and work into this. I read your notes carefully and you are aware that these are technically 'slide show pictures'.
There is a fashion on NG to zoom in and out as if it were a substitute for animation. I could not protect it, but in a way I wanted to simply because you showed respect for the rules and made the effort.
I have no problem with the dfact that the images are traced, so long as you gaive proper credit as you have.
I also have no problem with the fact that the music continues to the end, indeed I recommend it.
If you simply make the characters blink it would probably tip the balance for a number of us. If you showed a few bit so of sublte movement, carefully done, like something blowing in the wind or a tail moving it could look very atmospheric.
More colour to the background would help. Don't pander to the violent people- most of the best animators, don't use blood eg There She Is and Brackenwood.
Best wishes, Ice Dragon64 of the Dragons & Spirits
Ok
briefs is spelt wrong in the notes, otherwise OK
borderline
for a violent stick movie I thought it was not too bad. I would blam most of these without hesitation, but this had something going for it- a bit of style and randomness in an appealing way.
If it had backgrounds and perhaps more interesting sounds or something it might hit the spot.
1/5
thank u
Lemondemon image good!
Flash Video OK
borderline
not quite there for me. the sound was not right. There were some noises in the music which spoilt it, then the song was cut off abruptly, mid-sentance.
However, the graphics were good, better than I could do.
I like it
some bits flashed by a little too fast, like the credits.
the movie choice buttons don't work right because they take you through all the movies. 1 takes you through 123; 2 takes you through 2+3.
The third one was the best, it was the funny one that we can all picture in our minds.
so why did you call it Spoon Shorts, then?
"Lusikka" means Spoon. Thus, I am the Spoon Mage.
I did leave a menu button in the upper left, dunno, next time I'll add a "play through all" button and fix that.
Wow, that was something
first I went for the 1/5, then I though about it and watched it again and again.
I realised that if it was a joke I would have passed it no problem, then I decided that it was what it said it was and it had a point. Finally decided that it was well done.
This is good enough to be used for something- some kind of warning for people against drugs or something, social services, I don't know- ask people, do something with it. Please.
Good Luck, make the series
3/5
Spelling NOT fixed!
The movie looks OK, although I don't like trailers. Tom says don't submit trailers.
Bad spelling is always offputting, especially in titles and the bits we see first. Its even worse when you claim to have fixed it.
Don't worry if you can't spell just get someone else to check it through at least twice- after you have finished everything else.
-technology -coming
For stick, read potato
It doesn't make much sense, its just a so so fight movie.
Put in some proper sounds and I might think about it.
Was in the Dragon & Spirit Alliance. My DS Halloween & Christmas Quizzes are in the 2006 Collections. I was the main organiser on Wikigrounds, though I don't spend much time either there or here these days. I was a writer in the Monthly Writing and VACcom
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