IceDragon64's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Star Worms]

Great Fun

Your stuff is good

A few spelling details:
Auther/Author summond/summoned a Armageddon.

I would have put Darth Sideous by his name.
5/5

Jack-Mace responds:

tell me about me spelling mistakes ay... thanks...

[Max worm]

Great Stuff!

Very good. Very funny etc.
As you are now in the top league of Flash and seen by the whole world, you might improve the spelling, though:
Auther: author volage:voltage realy: really pulled of; put hem in;
witch: which allot: alot I'll will : I will Thing: Things ; to much to wright down
Don't get me wrong, I gave you 5/5 !

Jack-Mace responds:

I dont blame ya.... my english talk is way better then my typing, sorry bout that... my spelling-checker is broke

[animated bassist]

OK tutorial

Graphics were simple, but effective.

sound quality good, liked the fact that it involved your own sounds.

spelling- P-fingure (finger)

otherwise OK

FDCrew responds:

I total over looked that but then again
my spelin dos suk

[For the girl]

Aaaaah!

MUSHY!

I hope she realises how lucky she is!

Its great! Its funny

I wish some girl felt that much for me.

[M2L::Full Metal Alchemist]

Difficult to vote/review

You have put a lot of thought and work into this. I read your notes carefully and you are aware that these are technically 'slide show pictures'.
There is a fashion on NG to zoom in and out as if it were a substitute for animation. I could not protect it, but in a way I wanted to simply because you showed respect for the rules and made the effort.
I have no problem with the dfact that the images are traced, so long as you gaive proper credit as you have.
I also have no problem with the fact that the music continues to the end, indeed I recommend it.
If you simply make the characters blink it would probably tip the balance for a number of us. If you showed a few bit so of sublte movement, carefully done, like something blowing in the wind or a tail moving it could look very atmospheric.
More colour to the background would help. Don't pander to the violent people- most of the best animators, don't use blood eg There She Is and Brackenwood.
Best wishes, Ice Dragon64 of the Dragons & Spirits

[Stupid Anime Shorts]

Ok

briefs is spelt wrong in the notes, otherwise OK

[A random stick movie]

borderline

for a violent stick movie I thought it was not too bad. I would blam most of these without hesitation, but this had something going for it- a bit of style and randomness in an appealing way.

If it had backgrounds and perhaps more interesting sounds or something it might hit the spot.
1/5

Tastyrat responds:

thank u

[Kitten is Angry!]

Lemondemon image good!

Flash Video OK

[My sweet angel]

borderline

not quite there for me. the sound was not right. There were some noises in the music which spoilt it, then the song was cut off abruptly, mid-sentance.

However, the graphics were good, better than I could do.

[2006 Spoon Shorts 1]

I like it

some bits flashed by a little too fast, like the credits.

the movie choice buttons don't work right because they take you through all the movies. 1 takes you through 123; 2 takes you through 2+3.

The third one was the best, it was the funny one that we can all picture in our minds.

so why did you call it Spoon Shorts, then?

LusikkaMage responds:

"Lusikka" means Spoon. Thus, I am the Spoon Mage.

I did leave a menu button in the upper left, dunno, next time I'll add a "play through all" button and fix that.