Wow, that was something
first I went for the 1/5, then I though about it and watched it again and again.
I realised that if it was a joke I would have passed it no problem, then I decided that it was what it said it was and it had a point. Finally decided that it was well done.
This is good enough to be used for something- some kind of warning for people against drugs or something, social services, I don't know- ask people, do something with it. Please.
Good Luck, make the series
3/5
Spelling NOT fixed!
The movie looks OK, although I don't like trailers. Tom says don't submit trailers.
Bad spelling is always offputting, especially in titles and the bits we see first. Its even worse when you claim to have fixed it.
Don't worry if you can't spell just get someone else to check it through at least twice- after you have finished everything else.
-technology -coming
For stick, read potato
It doesn't make much sense, its just a so so fight movie.
Put in some proper sounds and I might think about it.
the English is weird
It doesn't make much sense, from the Authors notes through the movie. However, the rest of it is weird, random, but OK
you can be right but it was not for that score
its OK. Its funny.
I don't care what it parodys etc. Wand of Cuteness- funny!
Maybe she should do more with it.
TY. For a first I was going for brevity to make it easy on me self to animate.
The sword swinging scene was pretty hard.
As I go along Im learning the little tips and short cuts.
I was thinking of making another with Lola and Inu dont know. My next movie will be completely differnt.
Im a writer at heart, I learned to draw out of necesity. Glad ye liked it.
Looks good, when you finish it, I will pass it.
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SOO GooD!
I gave it as much as I could for something so very short, but in fact you couldn't make it any longer. Do NOT listen to anyone who says otherwise. the whole point of this IS to be a funny short.
You have the skills to do so much more. You can make collections if you like these shorts. Check out my favs if you like funny shorts.
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