Looked good, but...
... so slow I switched off. Sorry.
Looked good, but...
... so slow I switched off. Sorry.
borderline protect
I would not normally protect a quick bit of stick, but this has smoothness, adequate sound for the purpose , good action and humour.
I think the crossouts of the names, the last moment of hollow victory and the focus of light tipped the ballance into 2/5.
I would normally expect some background to pass most things.
OK, quite funny
Kinda neat how you used the story to get into a loop. Actual voice acting would have boosted it a lot.
Not too bad
If it causes a few people to learn about blowing the whistle I guess it can't be all bad. however, there isn't realy much to it and I can't bring myself to recconmend keeping it. I think you could take this theme and do something really good/funny taking the mickey out that dreadful series, but this isn't really it.
Eh?
Borderline
Not too bad, but not really much to it. It doesn't matter how many seperate movies you put together if each one doesn't actually interest or entertain, which I felt, somehow, these didn't.
I acknowledge that this description may be a matter of pesonal taste and I prefer to give more constructive criticism, sorry. I can't really put my finger on it.
Finish it and I'll pass it!
It will be good.
actually, it did pass judgement....i curently has 2.9/5
Very nice
beautifully done. Perfectly timed with the music and entertaining
Its OK.
I hope people watch it to the end, to catch all the little details. Best of luck.
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