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Nice one

A decent Clock film with no speakonia!

Not much actual animation- no walking, for example, but some nice art.

I loved the error message!

Creatus responds:

Actually there was walking! Watch the movie again! Thanks for the 5/10! <:D

Not bad, keep working on it

Its a borderline pass as its not really finished. Please finish it to the same standard.

I cannot hear what the medic says over the loud music.

64 responds:

I know, it's really loud. Go to Options and turn on subtitles.

Looked good, but...

...there wasn't much to it and what there was i couldn't make out very well.

Stars don't appear in front of the moon.

The whole sky needs to be one LINEAR colour, it would look much better- if you don't know how to do that check it out above the Library.

I didn't like it much but...

...at least the clock works!

GenericBallKlawk responds:

Happy Clock Day!
<33

OK cc thing

It was a bit funny.

The credits were hard to read because the colour of the text is too close to that of the background.
otherwise OK

Happy clockday from
IceDragon64 of the Dragons & Spirits

Good stuff, but it goes on a bit

As ever, there is a lot on it. More of your usual wandering through interactive options than the last one.

I was surprised that Pt 1 didn't take us to your web site. I see the 'missing' credits for pt 1 were all on here. Glad to see a mention of your dad's bands, since you always credit your mum.

small details:
end note: accorded/ occured ? four says/days

end of credits - sponsers/sponsors

I know you are reluctant to speak to us, but I think a polite acknowledgement of the effort I go to in your reviews would be in order, don't you? You reply to everyone else.
Best wishes,
IceDragon64 of the Dragons & Spirits

Congratulations!

You have an award- and you deserve it! Finally you have made a Wario movie which has enough to it to interest even those of us who are not interested in Mario/Wario. It carefully explains everything. For those of us who know the original, there is the extra humour of the implosion explaining that Wario moves towards the bang!
There is a lot of text, most of which is spot on and very readable.

There are just a few details:
At Wario's Pad- sees, not see's
Transportation- Mario's brother, not bother
In your intro I suggest you may want to say "although this is mainly an sprite movie" then end that bit with either one or three stops.
Did I miss the credits somewhere? I couldn't find any. the scene select refers to Main Credits, but I didn't find them.

Keep it going!
IceDragon64 of the Dragons & Spirits

Not too bad

Not enough to it for my taste.

spelling:
untill/ until

NO, NO, what am I doing?

I'm protecting' random stickmen fighting...
...again. Thats the third time this week.

I didn't think I would ever do this, but this is actually really good. It goes in my favourites!

"Who else wants some?" needs a question mark.

This obviously has some details and real humour, exporing Matrix parody etc. and the crazy smashed moon thing. You might consider putting in scene selecters (although I personally think they are pointless, other people like them and you do have defincate separate scenes in it. If you created more developed backgrounds you might get higher scores too and make this a real top scoring Flash.
Thank you

Was in the Dragon & Spirit Alliance. My DS Halloween & Christmas Quizzes are in the 2006 Collections. I was the main organiser on Wikigrounds, though I don't spend much time either there or here these days. I was a writer in the Monthly Writing and VACcom

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