IceDragon64's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[CC - We own]

I didn't like it much but...

...at least the clock works!

GenericBallKlawk responds:

Happy Clock Day!
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[A ClockDay Prank]

OK cc thing

It was a bit funny.

The credits were hard to read because the colour of the text is too close to that of the background.
otherwise OK

Happy clockday from
IceDragon64 of the Dragons & Spirits

[Another Wario V3 Part 2]

Good stuff, but it goes on a bit

As ever, there is a lot on it. More of your usual wandering through interactive options than the last one.

I was surprised that Pt 1 didn't take us to your web site. I see the 'missing' credits for pt 1 were all on here. Glad to see a mention of your dad's bands, since you always credit your mum.

small details:
end note: accorded/ occured ? four says/days

end of credits - sponsers/sponsors

I know you are reluctant to speak to us, but I think a polite acknowledgement of the effort I go to in your reviews would be in order, don't you? You reply to everyone else.
Best wishes,
IceDragon64 of the Dragons & Spirits

[Another Wario V3 Part 1]

Congratulations!

You have an award- and you deserve it! Finally you have made a Wario movie which has enough to it to interest even those of us who are not interested in Mario/Wario. It carefully explains everything. For those of us who know the original, there is the extra humour of the implosion explaining that Wario moves towards the bang!
There is a lot of text, most of which is spot on and very readable.

There are just a few details:
At Wario's Pad- sees, not see's
Transportation- Mario's brother, not bother
In your intro I suggest you may want to say "although this is mainly an sprite movie" then end that bit with either one or three stops.
Did I miss the credits somewhere? I couldn't find any. the scene select refers to Main Credits, but I didn't find them.

Keep it going!
IceDragon64 of the Dragons & Spirits

[Ackbar : Extended]

Not too bad

Not enough to it for my taste.

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untill/ until

[100]

NO, NO, what am I doing?

I'm protecting' random stickmen fighting...
...again. Thats the third time this week.

I didn't think I would ever do this, but this is actually really good. It goes in my favourites!

"Who else wants some?" needs a question mark.

This obviously has some details and real humour, exporing Matrix parody etc. and the crazy smashed moon thing. You might consider putting in scene selecters (although I personally think they are pointless, other people like them and you do have defincate separate scenes in it. If you created more developed backgrounds you might get higher scores too and make this a real top scoring Flash.
Thank you

[Sonic Chaos Z -Pilot-]

OK for a pilot

Finish it to that standard and I will pass it at least 2/5.
I don't pass pilot/test/previews Tom asks us not to submit them. 0/5

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there/their owners

RicPendragon responds:

LOL, fair enough

[Fight Inc. Episode #1]

NO, NO, what am I doing?

...I am protecting a stickman fight!

Because it is the best i've ever seen. It has highest quality hand to hand fighting and a few subtle details, like the stick flying out and back into his hand, that make it protectable.
I like the little scene windows, they give it that extra that takes it beyond the thousands we get on NG.

You have the skills, if you gave it story/point then it could get a really good score.
However, as it stands I can only give up to 2/5 for a stickfight.

[Rigoeza trailer]

Looks good...

finish it to this standard and I will pass it.

Until then, don't submit trailers any more. Go to alphas

0/5