Very good!
Fun/funny
good art/animation
Nice interaction- hyperlinks
different. I can imagine various monitors around the world graced with a paper robot on top by now! I will show this to the Dragons & Spirits when I see them.
Best wishes,
Ice
Very good!
Fun/funny
good art/animation
Nice interaction- hyperlinks
different. I can imagine various monitors around the world graced with a paper robot on top by now! I will show this to the Dragons & Spirits when I see them.
Best wishes,
Ice
Good, funny
+ good art
+good graphics
+funny
All cool but you might improve the spelling in the credits!
Uhh, as far as I'm concered the spelling is fine. I made note I spelled it all right.
Very good
+excellant art
+excellant animation
+entertaining story
+excellant voice acting- Hickory is especially good- she sounds SO sexy!
-voices a bit quiet in parts and hard to hear- I needed the subtitles.
The anime style with the funny no-nose faces and wishy washy backgrounds is not much to my personal taste, but its good of its type. You have done well and I look forward to the next installment. I watched it with some of my D&S colleagues, who all enjoyed it.
Best Wishes,
IceDragon64 of the Dragons & Spirits
Looks very good
+some very good effects. hard to believe its all in flash. Excellant 3d and stuff
-rather small size though.
Its fine, its good
Up to your usual standards
As the guy before me says, you might expect this to be on TV.
nothing wrong with it, nothing I'd change.
Well Done!
Funny
+Funny 'translation'.
+crazy complicated pictures!
-couldn't read the subtititles well against the mixed backgrounds
-there must be a way to reduce the file size enough to get it all in?
I am no expert at such things, but ask around and experiment.
difficult to review-score
My head says its not very good, but my heart says you put quite a bit into it.
+you have indeed told the whole story, more or less.
-the images are scrappy
-The sound really is pretty rough. The worst aspect is that the music is too loud in relation to the speaking. Seeing as its in Speakonia, which is not the easiest to hear I cna hardly make out the workdsYou explained why you used Speakonia, but I am afraid it hasn't come out at all well.
-The animation is very limited.
-there are no real backgrounds. It would help a lot to explain the story if we could see where people are and a bit of snow on things.
See what you can do to improve this.
Best wishes,
Ice
I'll try
borderline protect
Its not great and its rather tasteless, but its technically OK and its slightly funny.
There isn't much to it really and I am sure you can do better, but I see you've got through, so OK.
technically limited, but funny enough
It doesnt seem to sync all that well in the later stages, but we got the idea. I have to say I have no idea what the real lyrics are!
For all I know yours WERE the real lyrics.
Do more like this and see if you can incorporate a bit more Flash into them for the serious types like SCM, who is reviewing just before me tonight! People love misheard lyrics, there are websites just for them!
Best wishes & merry Christmas
Ice
Sorry It didnt Sync, You Really Need a Good Internet Connection, Ill Tinker With It And See What I Can Do, Merry Christmas Matey. =D
Was in the Dragon & Spirit Alliance. My DS Halloween & Christmas Quizzes are in the 2006 Collections. I was the main organiser on Wikigrounds, though I don't spend much time either there or here these days. I was a writer in the Monthly Writing and VACcom
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