IceDragon64's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Marmot]

Beautiful

Lovely sounds, animation, style, story, humour, expression, and camera angles.

Need to work on filesize though.

Please do more.

[Rise and shine]

Disappointing

Nice start- goes to nothing.

Lovely music, nice birds, sun starts to rise...

then reaches a flat top? as it rises further something spoils the line on the left, then it abruptly ends replaced by what I would call scribble and nonsense. Worse, the lovely music goes on when the rest has stopped.

this lovely music deserves a full, quality video, but this isn't it.

I would like to see smooth quality images, maybe expressing waking up and early morning, sunrise. life setting about its day routine etc.
You have the ability- please do it some time.

TreasurePlanet responds:

thanks for the thoughtful review.

this was not a project meant to be stressed over and planned.
This was to relax and just... do whatever I want.
What im saying is that there was not supposed to be a story.

but i will take your review into consideration for future projects.

cheers/
-Spacecase

[B-Fuddled]

Oh snap!!!!

I didn't see it coming!

(shaking head with embarrassment)

its good, its neat, it looks and sounds fine. Its everything it is supposed to B.

[animation scraps]

I suppose...

... its just about good enough art/animation to keep, despite not being anything really. You obviously have great potential and I look forward to seeing proper complete work from you in due course, with sound, colour, length and a plot that shows PERSONALITY, which will make us care about the characters, not just action.

Then you can delete this scrap that doesn't really belong here!

Until then, good luck, keep working!

axl-ryder responds:

you're absolutely right, and when I submit the real thing I'll probably delete this, but for now I just wanted to have something for people to click on if they happen to view my account. Thanks for the critique.

[lipsync tutorial]

limited

Maybe useful, but very limited. No sound or demonstration. I feel it just stopped short. Some text being spoken, to demonstrate the letters as you have shown them would have made it much more inspiring.

[[KK] A Happy Clock Day!]

Nice one

Good looking, effective, well drawn etc. Even has a working clock face.

[Chris and Harry (Parody)]

Not too bad

Not everyone knows Chris and Harry. A link would have been good. Animation basic; art OK.

SmallSSaaMM responds:

www.newgrounds.com/portal/view/468840
Special for you :D

[Jake and Friends]

not too bad

looked OK, otherwise , you already said what is wrong with it. Theres just not enough to it. Take some time, make the next one so you feel good about it, THEN submit.