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Orange?

Can't really see the point in restricting the shades to one colour, its doesn't add anything. As usual for collabs of seperates some very basic stuff gets through on the coat tails of good work.

Made me smile a little, some good animation and all good sounds in there. All well put together.

JKR responds:

Restricting the colors allows, or rather FORCES, the animator to make different choices than they might otherwise. It's a great exercise to improve things you would never even think about with full color. You have to balance things more, and really look at the whole picture since you are limited. Anyway, glad it made you smile some, because after all that's the whole point of doing amusing animations! Cheers.

Nice work

Nothing exceptional but OK. Nice little ending.
Please insert links to the other Zoom Outs- Zoom Out by OxSox and The Scale of the Universe. Each has its own features.

It was...

so-so, there were these sticks and a birthday, like -why would we care? Its was barely passable and then...

Oh yeah! I remembered why I watch NG. How often does anyone literally LOL, even for a moment?
Thanks.

Look forward to Mop day next year!

Beautiful

Lovely sounds, animation, style, story, humour, expression, and camera angles.

Need to work on filesize though.

Please do more.

Disappointing

Nice start- goes to nothing.

Lovely music, nice birds, sun starts to rise...

then reaches a flat top? as it rises further something spoils the line on the left, then it abruptly ends replaced by what I would call scribble and nonsense. Worse, the lovely music goes on when the rest has stopped.

this lovely music deserves a full, quality video, but this isn't it.

I would like to see smooth quality images, maybe expressing waking up and early morning, sunrise. life setting about its day routine etc.
You have the ability- please do it some time.

TreasurePlanet responds:

thanks for the thoughtful review.

this was not a project meant to be stressed over and planned.
This was to relax and just... do whatever I want.
What im saying is that there was not supposed to be a story.

but i will take your review into consideration for future projects.

cheers/
-Spacecase

Oh snap!!!!

I didn't see it coming!

(shaking head with embarrassment)

its good, its neat, it looks and sounds fine. Its everything it is supposed to B.

I suppose...

... its just about good enough art/animation to keep, despite not being anything really. You obviously have great potential and I look forward to seeing proper complete work from you in due course, with sound, colour, length and a plot that shows PERSONALITY, which will make us care about the characters, not just action.

Then you can delete this scrap that doesn't really belong here!

Until then, good luck, keep working!

axl-ryder responds:

you're absolutely right, and when I submit the real thing I'll probably delete this, but for now I just wanted to have something for people to click on if they happen to view my account. Thanks for the critique.

limited

Maybe useful, but very limited. No sound or demonstration. I feel it just stopped short. Some text being spoken, to demonstrate the letters as you have shown them would have made it much more inspiring.

Was in the Dragon & Spirit Alliance. My DS Halloween & Christmas Quizzes are in the 2006 Collections. I was the main organiser on Wikigrounds, though I don't spend much time either there or here these days. I was a writer in the Monthly Writing and VACcom

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