IceDragon64's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[Learn about gullotines!]

Change The Spelling of the title NOW!

-Ngers can be so fickle- Gullotine/Guillotine.
-did you mean ' which is foot instead of '' which means inch?
-Can't read the information without zooming in, which is not really right.

Since it really isn't right at present some people might bl@m it, just to make you sort it out. Authors are notorious for not bothering otherwise. However, I passed it, so please sort it!

However, apart from that its a neat little documentary thing. good art, good sound, good info.

How about adding another info button for more info on decapitation? If you are up for it, PM me and I will give you a couple of interesting links.
Best Wishes
Ice

funsquares responds:

Actually, this began as a blueprint for a school project, a model i was going to create. The model was in inches, and i just forgot to change the measurements in the current form.
----thanks for the input, i will change the text

---Funsquares

[WordScramblesCountries.94]

Its good, I'm crap!

I tried all three and I got a high of 86 on easy, 66 on med, 65 on hard. Why did you remove the places you removed?- you've taken away my brother's house in the Caribbean! Does Hong Kong still count as a country or whatever?
Best Wishes,
Ice

LuckyLollipopLad responds:

As I mentioned via PM, I'll probably change the list again for the next version, to be a more accurate list of actual 'countries'.

Thanks for the feedback with your scores and also all the help you've given throughout!

[The Expert's Guide - NG 2]

you never told me!

To be honest I can't see much changed. Its good, of course. The little pictures of the portal awards are rather too dark against a dark background, otherwise its OK.
Have you seen my tut yet?
Ice

highwatermark responds:

OK, I'll PM you soon.

[Photoshop Tutorialab beta]

Put tests in the alphas, I do.

I dont want to see scraps. If all you wanted to do was test the preloaders etc there are plenty of places you could do that. get a DA acct, for example.

Zeppekk responds:

I HAVE a DeviantArt account, www.zeppekk.deviantart.com

And besides, although i didn't expect it, this wasn't blammed.

[Pong-o-Matic]

sorry, pal, its glitched

I did easy and it was fine but when I tried to play medium it just flickered each time and told me in about three seconds I had won or lost, like it played an almost instant game?!?!?!

Otherwise it looks OK. I wouldnt give it much for style cos its just Pong, but if it worked I would protect it cos it looks pretty good and its got levels.

[Dress Up Doll]

Barely passed

+choice good
+art good

-no sound
-no extras. Dressups are two a penny on NG and many are blammed. I passed it for the good art but we usualy expect some backgrounds, sound, movie clips etc.

-eyes higher layer than hair and glasses- the fact that you spent a limited time on the level of layers shows.

[ActionScript Explained #1]

OK tut

Theres loads of tuts and I don't pass them unless they have something, which I think this has.

However it could do with tidying up. As you say it has a lot of typos- with tuts its got to be right, to keep peoples confidence. Always get someone to view your work before you post it.
I don't use much AS so I'm not much of a judge, but it looks OK as far as I can see.

If you want people to join your Productions then put in a link where your note is.

thequackattack responds:

yes, I will for sure tidy it up! I'm glad you liked it. Thank you for the helpful and honest review!

[Bubble Tanks]

its fun, its interesting

Its one of those quite simple, but challenging games. Neat tidy, arm-achingly addictive. I might play it again.

[Character maker!]

Ok but limited

+art OK
-animation None
+interactivity OK
-Interest, limited
+sound- nice music, refreshingly different to usual NG, but nothing else.
Theres noting wrong with it- it works OK etc. however I am surprised at how well it has done. Dressups are two-a-penny here and with no special options/features at all it is nothing special.

Upgrades to this kind of thing are:

Music options
Music on/off buttons
Change of scene behind character
More characters to dress up
Movie clip items
buttons to More Info/credits
button to NG Dressup Collection
sounds on buttons