IceDragon64's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[Tutorial: SWF Capturing]

Looks Good, Sounds useful

You never know, I might use that someday!

couple of small errors you might check out:
eg instead of ie- "a website ite/eg NewGrounds

also, in Captions by yourself-
"newgrounds" put in capitols
spell submittion/submission

[Mystifying Mouse Trails]

Nice work!

+Lots of options of trails
+four options of differents styles of music and off
+Lots of backgrounds in a great variety of styles
+Nice art & animation all through
+All functioning well
+some good ideas
+Im with this idiot was funny!

Ive seen this type of thing here before
You might try some art with a little more delicate, intricate style as well, most of your options were kind of regular or blobby. You might use some imported pictures if you like in the trails or something.

Stives1111 responds:

Lol thanks very much, and thanks for the advice!!!

[QWERTY Warriors]

Very good

+ entertaining
+educational
+looks and sounds good
+addictive
+its in my favourites!

-since its about spelling, you MUST sort out your own spelling- its not that diffucult/difficult!

Best Wishes,
Ice

[happy halloween dress up]

OK Dressup

i liked the long tongue thing and the dripping blood thing.

shame no sound/music or background

[Dibais castle]

Excellant work

I am not entirely sure what I am looking at- is this your own world or your depiction of someone else's? Either way it is beautiful and is obviously a labour of love. Is the art all original or is some of it imported?

It is very good and I gave it 5/5, which is very rare for me, but I could give you piles of pointers to the spelling/grammar/english if you want. Its hard work and expect proper crediting for it. PM me if you want it and I will go through the lot
+Art top class
+animation simple but effective
+Point- could use more explanation of what we are looking at.
+Sound- I'm not sure if I would recommend more sounds- possibly
+Music The music in the library was Excellant- as is all of Enyas work- some other, such as the lame loop where the weapons are, dissappointed me- they didn't seem in character, but at least they had variety.
Thank you for this work
IceDragon64 of the Dragons & Spirits

[So you think you know NG?]

Good Quiz

Good Questions- i thought I Knew NG until I tried this! I thought the portal opened in 1999- are you sure?

Sound loops need off buttons, remember us idiots cant just click through the quiz like you who make and test it and however good the music is it gets annoying. If you check out my quizzes I dont loop the sound. I like the idea of lives to lose, people get annoyed about always going back to the beginning. However, even with lives 20 questions without a checkpoint is a long way to go back. with lives i would put in a checkpoint at 10 questions.
Spelling: futre/future featre/feature (twice)
OK Quiz- do check mine out they have different styles
Best Wishes,
IceDragon64 of the Dragons & Spirits

ELFERRETO responds:

Thankyou, yep, i am sure the portal was opened in 2000, i have checked out your quizes, the grahpics are pretty cool and i like it how you display a bit of information for each question answered, i might make one like that next time, as for the music, everyone is saying it just loops, well that just tells you that your slow at answering questions! naa, i might change it sooner or later if someone gives me an idea, i always like small song files so the submission doesnt take way too long to upload, i thought up the idea of lives when i was playing a different quiz game, got to question 20 and then accidentally missed the right question, so i had to start all over again, the checkpoint idea is pretty good, but the lives thing is the whole fun of learning the questions rather than just tapping them in over and over, my spelling isnt that great, i must admit that there are probably heaps of spelling errors in that, i try to fix it and the macromedia flash 8 spell chacker didnt do too much to help me, thanks for the review, i probably replied with a bigger one, as you said,

Best Wishes,
IceDragon64 of the Dragons & spirits....

thats not right..... ah!

Best Wishes,
ELFERRETO of the dragons & spirits...

Still doesnt sound right....

Best wishes,
ELFERRETO......yeh

[The Tutorial Collab '06]

thanks to you guys...

...i now have an animated bat cursor in my DS Halloween Quiz!
(Submission 31st Oct 2006)

[Ultimate Newgrounds quiz]

Good Quiz

As with the photo thing, it has plenty of errors, but I could still understnad it and it looked OK. The end where the scores were needs improving. the score/level thing is cramped.

If you want a full list of the errors then use my pm and update/improve the photoshop tut and put me in the credits!
Best wishes,
Ice

Makdim-crazy responds:

Thx,you proved to be very helpfull!

[Spave Invaders!!!]

Not too bad, but...

spell your titles right and add sound.

There are heaps of space invaders on NG, so I wouldnt pass one with no sound. Otherwise it looks OK, although only two waves of invaders with no extras, like different ships with different points or the mystery ship its not that good.
Nice background.
spelling:
spave/space to/too
work on it.
Best wishes,
Ice

[Alistair Cambellinator]

Very Good

+Fun
+Great Idea
+well laid out

-choice of words doesn't make many sentences
-spelling: beeings/beings devistated/devastated

Make more!