IceDragon64's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[Biology 101 (Cells)]

Good, but needs details checked

Please sort these out soon- I will show the Dragons and Spirits this Flash when it is sorted!
Plants:
a/an even better why/way
take out the word 'these' nasty- water isn't nasty, only CO2.

Animal:
Table of conents/contents
arnt/aren't
enzymes that that
apparatusand
structues/structures
nuclear enelope/envelope
bilayer/bilayers
overlape/overlap
Much improved on blammed version. I like the voice it is quality naration, but that is the only sound- look for some other sound for something, preferably a little humorous.
Education on NG! Best Wishes- Ice

[Windows RG Build 207]

Yes, very good

A few spelling errors,

eg sugest/suggest
otherwise fine

[Defend of d Ancient Tree]

Surprisinly skilful game!

+though its simple in a sense, positioning yourself and timing the shots. Choosing when and where to shoot without killing the boyfriend proved challenging.

+I thought the story and images were funny and original!

[Mr Flacit's Word Search]

V Good game

Accepts some plurals and not others.

Something should happen to your score as you go from round to round. just ading up endlessly isn't veyr good. Not up to the rest of the standards of this game. Otherwise playing on, rather than resetting is rather meaningless. high scores in ten rounds, maybe?
High score website?

giving a person some kind of rank in ten rounds total would be cool-
numbskull, learner, so-so, ok wordy, wordy wise, wordsmith, wordmaster ? what do you think? I would be curious to know how my score compares with others and I am sure i am not alone.

[Star Hunter]

Good game, my hands ache now!

+ very playable
+ upgrades

- I cant get the hi score to work. I type in my name, but it comes up with "type name here" on the chart. I was quite proud of my score I am 29875. :(

FrostedMuffins responds:

Ah man, thanks for spotting that, very very sorry. I'll update it tomarrow. Thanks for the review.

[mouse game tutorial]

Looks OK

I don't do much actionscript so I can't judge that much , but it looks OK as far as I can see. I might try making my own cursor, that could be cool.

Afew small details:

Make a proper hit area for your back & forward buttons. At the moment the thin green line is the hit area, so if you click in the middle of the arrow, as people will, it doesn't work. Just go into the last part of the button maker which most people ignore and make a fair sized rectangle.

whos/who's

in Step 1 the actionscript covers a bit of the text.

yodd responds:

This was mostly an excuse to submit somethign useful to newgrounds, glad you like it. Fatal killed my cats

[Rock Rock Gem]

It dropped sweeties- Yay!

Fank you! 50 000 points later I have no teeth left and I have put on lots of weight!

what were the second things to fall? white chocolate coins? slices of banana?

fun.

[nevermore-1]

Game OK- art excellant

+your graphic style is so good- you could do so much with it!
+nice touches with the mouse click

-small errors-

controlls/controls

...most actionscrip/actionscript