IceDragon64's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[ms office space desroyer]

What fun!

My hand aches from pressing A!

Dont change it, its everything a silly game should be!

[Sakura dress-up game]

Its OK

There are shiploads of dressups and I pass most of them. However I'm getting a bit fussier now. Yours has a neat fit good graphics.

Kairi- Yay!

[Futurama Quiz Game 2]

the violence is on my ears!

such a big change in volume is dodgy, you might harm someone wearing earphones!

Check the spelling- engineering

Otherwise OK

[King of Buttons 3]

Its not much to my taste, but...

I can see the work you put into it. The complexity of options is remarkable, and reminds me of MEKoftheMEKKingdom.

Endurance... Jesus, we are sad people!

[Webcam in flash tutorial]

I wont vote...

... because i don't know enough about webcams to know if this is any good, but your poor spelling puts me off.

when you are 'teaching the world' you really need it to be right, it affects people's confidence in you as a teacher.
If you can't spell, get someone to help you.

Rohedin responds:

I scanned all the text from the tutorial on MS Word and in total there was 1 spelling mistake.

[Tennis Pinball]

I just get a bl;ank screen

?

what is this a polar bear in a snow storm? Or free blam points?

[The Ultra Tut]

OK tut

Some of the graphics looked pretty good.

I didn't study it in detail, I'm not a games person, so I can't judge the script, but it seemed OK.

You should remember that in a tut, you are a teacher, therefore try and get spelling and punctuation spot on (its not bad). for example you used the wrong your (you're) and leave a space after a fullstop- it makes it easier to read.

DarkNephilim responds:

Sorry i never was a grammer kinda guy.

[Poking The Doughboy]

Nearly there

When you click, the finger needs to move forward and poke.

As it is it comes across as sloppy and not as fun. Ideally the Dough boy should move as if poked.