IceDragon64's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[Star Trek: Communications]

I don't know

Its working erratically for me. Maybe its just me. I tried loading it again. Is there supposed to be sound? It certainly needs it.
Sometimes the cursor just dissappears. one time the text flashed by unreadably.
Spell captain/captian.
I haven't fugured it out yet. I will try again.
I will give it the benefit of the doubt and protect it, trusting you will fix any glitches that are not just my computer being silly.

[The Click Me Game V.2]

Yes!

This version is a step forward. I like the additions. You should improve the spelling of obviously, which you have spelt wrong 3 times!
I do think that the link to Impossible Quiz is a graceful addition, it adds Interact and Style; you might just put "by Splapp-me-do" next to the link to make it clear you are linking to another author you are giving respect to.
Now that Click-Me V2 has, of course, got through judgement, you should really delete the original.
Catch up with Clix-Pix's progress on my DA site, I will link to this when I submit on NG.
Best Wishes,
Ice

[Beginner Flash Tutorial]

tutorials...

... get people emotional. Its true that they have all been done. however provided its of reasonable quality I will support it. Yours is simple and to the point. Besides, if you look through the tuts int he tut collection, they are not perfect.
The whole idea that people want to reach out and teach what they know is cool- thats how I learnt what I know.
Your text/spelling etc is better than most here on NG, so I 3'd it!
Best Wishes,
Ice

[Momentum Missile Mayhem]

Superb!

Top quality game marred slightly by stupid spelling errors. If you want me to hunt them down PM me.

I could play this for hours, but I must go to bed. My fingers are frozen by playing anyway! Is this really just a flash game or did you steal it from a console?

[Space Impact Tiny]

Good

Has commercial potential. Tucked in the corner of a web page or as a preloader game or something.
Only thing I miss is a display of my score when I am hit before going back to the beginning. It goes so quick I never know how well I did. I am going back to play again! Excellant small size. I think I will fav it as a good example of tiny file size quality.

[Ragdoll - Stair Fall]

Good...

...if you like sick stuff. Can't say its particularly my cup of tea, but yeah it works and its original. It tried it maybe 10 times and got a hi of 144.

[Character Maker]

borderline protect

It all works, but there isn't all that much to it. Dressups are two-a-penny on NG and this one has nothing of interest to offer.

Possible improvements:

shoes
alternate backgrounds- can include movie clips
Movie clip items
humour
alternative music (in on/off buttons)- I can send you one to adapt
things to hold

Toady1104 responds:

I lost this .fla file to edit the things, but I want the on/off button code if you have.

[Weapon Tutorial V2 BIG]

Good art BUT

Someone thinks the buttons don't work cos you didn't put a proper hit area behind them, so they only work when you click exactly on the text instead of a nice rectangle.

You put a lot of work into the guns but you let yourself down by using very poor english. Get someone to help you edit it.

To make this a really useful tut you could get info on the guns so people could use them accurately. If that is hard, then get someone to help, maybe from the forums.

"This is a Spik 32, its made in Lithuania and is a small, light semi, well known on the black market. Use it for terrorists and bank robbers"

"This is a Margon 360. Its a heavy rifle not much seen outside Nato forces in Europe. Use this for regular Nato soldiers"

Put in a couple of links that would show background and development of your subject and you would appeal to a much wider audience, instead of just being a source of good-looking guns for stick men.

[The Movie Quiz]

OK

hard to read. need to improve text/background

I won't bother doing a full review cos you've already said you wont improve it.