IceDragon64's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[Birdy by Netstupidity]

Its Bigger Fish game only different!

Its good. Unlike the usual fish which is tolerable if it looks and works all right, this one uses gravity to make it more different, the birds get larger as you do and there is a certain other surprise waiting for the unwary!

Looks good, sounds good and plays well.

What is the bit across the top if its not an advert? If it advertises something its an advert, surely?

[My cute pets]

this is a nice, cute game

Its WAY too hard for me. I didn't last a minute, but thats my problem.

Its got good art, sound and plenty to do. It works fine, as far as I could get!

[Ninja Practice]

Nice neat little game

Looks good, very simple. Like your fish game. The art is professional in style and makes an otherwise simple game look good

[Fish Eat Fish]

OK, neat

It looks good and works OK. Needs some sound. Nice minigame

[Physics Is Fun 1]

Oh, yes!

Fun and interesting, tho simple. Its not something one would do for veyr long, but that doesn't matter. It succeeds in doing what you set out to do just fine.

The perspective of the house is a bit odd and 'persons' should have an apostrophe, but otherwise its fine. Sounds as if the edits you made were a good choice.

you could put in a more info button that would take the viewer to a few pages of info, for those who are curious. For example wikipedia has a page on Coefficient of friction, tho something far less stogy might be better. Some info on how an equation like this might have a practical use might be of interest. Don't be put off by the mindless 90% of NG. You made it fun enough to pass, so now cater for the small percentage who might press the button and fav/five you.

IceDragonkin responds:

I value your opinion a lot and im glad you liked it so much. I'll keep the extra material in mind for the next educational one i do but this ones already lost in the archives of NewGrounds. Oddly enough i responded to your review back when i made this but for some reason the response didn't stay so heres a new one.

~IceDragonkin~

[The Candy Forest]

so-so

It works OK, but the distance from the top to the bottom is so short that I could not get out of the way before the pumpkins hit me. I find it hard to believe that most people could. I got a better score from just zooming the sweets across the page as fast as possible regardless. I got half way through level 3 like that!

It looked and sounded OK, though its not a particularly exciting or original game. Shame you missed Halloween it would definately have scored better at this one or next one.

Spell:
theive/theif

Assios responds:

Thanks for responding. Yes, it was my first game. But, as I said, its more a "Happy Halloween-message", than a game ;)

[Helpfile]

Very good

Lots in here. It all seems all right to me, except it is poorly written, filled with typos etc. Music would have been good, or just a few sounds when you click things, anything to give it more life. Take a look at my Art tutorial- it is probalby not as well presented as yours, nor anything like as informative or technical, but the voice makes it stand out. Our NG Expert tutorial explores the full range of music and sounds, bringing life to an otherwise boring subject.

If you ever want to do a full resub of this, let me know and I will edit the text in full and correct your notes too!

[Breast Cancer Quiz]

Very good and important

I learnt quite a bit from this, getting thorugh second time. Would you like me to edit it for you, going through the spelling etc? It is something I do quite a lot of here. PM me.

Little-Rena responds:

Nah, people can live with a few miss spellings, it's not like you can't understand it.

[Portal: The Flash Version]

Great but

it might be better if you didn't write everything assuming the whole world already knows what The Portal is. As far as I was concerned the only The Portal online is the NG Portal!

Otherwise tis a great game, even tho I got totally stuck on level 6!