Score: 4

"So so"

submission: SBC takes a walk

date: 14 hours ago

Its basic Ock stuff. dull. Only the easter egg just about saves it.

Score: 6

"Good"

submission: The Persian Quiz

date: 14 hours ago

Technically correct with clean, tidy, well-written text. As quizmaker myself I know what goes into making one of these and whilst there is virtually nothing you could call animation in it, getting every route of every button, along with every word right is hard.

It could be much improved with better graphics. It would not be that difficult to add some correctly credited photos; something more interesting at the level changes; a bit of animation; more 'reward' for winning.
Should you decide to work on this at all, get in touch and I will help you. Take a look at my art tutorial if you want some basic ideas for livening things up.

thank you for teaching me something about these people and Zoroastrianism. They certainly put other ideas of empire to shame.

Score: 4

"very basic"

submission: oh child

date: November 6, 2009

but just about passable- its a game that works Try not to submit stuff you know is poor- push yourself to make it as good as you can.

Art, writing, animation, everything- just one example- the scribbly numbers were so poor it looked like there was no 8 only 6's!

Take a look at my Art Inspiration Tut if you want to take some basic steps forward.

Always put in a credits page

Score: 4

"borderline"

submission: The balloons boy

date: October 23, 2009

its pretty basic and scribbly, but its got the basics, its topical and its vaguely funny.
Credits?

Score: 1

"work in progress?"

submission: Horse Play X3

date: August 29, 2009

I can see that these horses look quite good and they have nice limbs for you to make something with. They clearly have potential, but what you have actually created has no appeal to me at all. Basically it looks like you are just experimenting with something and what we see here is not, in my opinion at all ready to be submitted as a complete submission for our entertainment and judgement.
Needs background, story, sortiing out movement into something smooth and realistic.

Score: 5

"great message!"

submission: Cig Will Kill You

date: August 4, 2009

put across very simply! Looks OK.

Score: 2

"disappointing"

submission: [LL]Digital Lock

date: July 21, 2009

there really isn't much to it. the thing jumps over and then...

So many things could have happened. Funny things, surprising things.

Your reason certainly doesn't excuse the action of submitting something blantently incomplete and meaningless. You should, in fact always give yourself a bit of time after finishing a sub before you submit it and satisfy yourself that its really how you want to be seen by the world.
However, I trust you will take a bit more time and show us something more interesting/entertaining in future and be a credit to your crew, so...

The friendly Dragons & Spirits crew welcome a new Lock!

Score: 4

"Not bad"

submission: Why, Wade?

date: July 7, 2009

Quite good graphics in that bullet-in and -out bit.

Don't think much of the message. As far as I have even seen, Wade doesn't hate any Krews as such, he only reacts to specific submissions, authors, users and BBS messages, that in his opinion break rules or get personal. I am sorry if you really think otherwise.
Best Wishes to your Krew from ours.
IceD of the D&S

Score: 2

"im Clicking Here..."

submission: Pic a Pic Jigsaw Puzzle

date: July 1, 2009

...and nothing is happening?

Score: 7

"Pretty Good"

submission: LL - Locks at War III

date: June 21, 2009

I decided to come and find out a bit about you. I will study your work more. The images were good. Good atmosphere. bomb cloud could have been better.