Score: 5

"OK, but rather basic"

submission: Ode to Heart Break

date: August 31, 2008

Not much to it really. Shame to have a glaring spelling error in so few words-

scares/scars. Please fix

Hope he feels better soon. Time is a great healer, even if it doesn't fele like you can heal, we usualy do.

Score: 7

"What a fun idea"

submission: Dress Up Your Flash

date: August 31, 2008

Lots of fun, amusing twist to the overdone dressup idea. Nice big screen to put them on. Well drawn items and background. Good music.
Please do work on this, it could go far:
1. Music off button
2. Alternative music button (though theres nothing wrong with this music)
3. Click to another screen with alternatives eg a Clock Screen with relevant backgrounds and lots more clock refs OR a screen looking like the Flash is going into the Portal, with other flashes around it.

Score: 9

"Excellant!"

submission: Newgrounds Helpful Guide

date: August 24, 2008

This is a useful and inspiring Thingy. Would you like to link to our Experts Guide, which would compliment yours very well? Take a look if you don't know it-
newgrounds.com/portal/view/387389,

Then contact Highwatermark, who is the senior author. I would like to see a big 2-way link between our projects, to our mutual benefit.

Your thing has a few tiny errors, if you would like me to proof read it and send you a list, let me know.

Score: 8

"Its good!"

submission: A picture of existence

date: August 18, 2008

Please arrange a link between yours and Zoom Out, which makes an interesting comparison:
newgrounds.com/portal/view/355209

Contact him. You could both put a link in your movie

Score: 4

"so-so"

submission: Pie People: Ep.1

date: July 28, 2008

vaguely funny. suitably random. spelling not perfect.
Quiz OK

Score: 8

"Which collection do you have in mind?"

submission: weird lil cartoon

date: July 21, 2008

As usual, it has the Octo small and neat style. Well done on the awards. Look forward to 2nd episode. If you want the DS to review it before submission here, put it in the alphas or devientArt and PM me.
Best Wishes,
Ice

Score: 7

"Neat and smooth"

submission: Tetris-Sticks

date: July 21, 2008

Nice piece of work. Smooth action and good looking. good music.
No replay button tho!?!??

The music goes on with nothing happening on the screen which is not ideal. Even if it was just an animation loop it would be better.

I am a Tetris fan and the DS have a Tetris animation which maybe we will finish one day.

Score: 7

"Yeah, its good"

submission: When I'm Running

date: July 8, 2008

Its all there and its OK. Making better animation of walking and running is the next key stage you need to do. Take a look back at the wolf and you will see what I mean.
Sorry, I only just spotted that Jimi and Hendrix are both spelt wrong. Never mind, its good, and part of a good, entertaining portfolio. I will get the DS to take a look.
Best Wishes,
Ice

Score: 7

"Nice and smooth"

submission: Stop & Stare...

date: June 27, 2008

Nice style, content, message. Hope Carly is OK now.

Score: 4

"Needs sound, badly"

submission: How airsoft guns work

date: February 17, 2008

Otherwise OK. More info would be good.