Very crude and unattractive with minimal sound and not interesting to me at all, but still a full story with the basics I require to pass it keeping on NG.
If you know how to put sound on then why don't you put a few more on instead of just a dull repetative soundtrack?
Its is good enough quality for a teaser, but I don't like teasers- People wind us up with teasers and no finished film. As it is I don't really understand the story, so I hope it will make sense when it is finished. Of course the sound, talking and animation are fine, but HURRY UP AND FINISH IT- then get on and DO OUR FILM as you promised so long ago!
That's a quick judgement for you, This film is already finished, about a year ago. published to my website not too long ago, i will upload it here as long as the national competition of my country ends.
sent you a reply regarding our project. but just to be clear, i did not promise anything. you will be credited as the original author and I will be the producer. this is unpaid project. just saying.
This has some effort and potential, but needs work.
the Sound is OK and the music is good.
The animation is limited and uninspiring but does the job.
The plot etc is simple but quite thoughtful. Is there a connection between the intro story and the rest of it? The artwork with those building looks good though slightly fuzzy, then its just matchstick men, which is a disappointment.
What really bugged me is that the text is so hard to read. Most came up dark with the dark man in front of it. I tried 3 times to read it, finally reading most of it, including the spelling mistake.
Right, I am definatley doing a remake. Please review and see how you like it then. It should be submitted by the 20th of may or earlier. Thanks for the review.
OK, it does work and it has music. It is a dressup, but no...
Its very basic, with so little options and interest that it holds no interest to me. The black garment with red stripe looks quite good but thats it.
Only dressups with a fair few options, preferably with some animation, maybe background options and better art than this would get over a 1 from me.
Its a start.
Built 2 snowmen
+ it all works
+ it looks OK
+it has music
- Nothing added or special - most decent Dressups have a little animation etc. or alternative bgds.
- music dull
- I can't figure out what some of the items are- the dark double humps are?
- Spelling, so little writing, you could get it right
Double Humps were supposed to be their feet, Sorry I'm not yet so good at drawing.
Thanks for reviewing.
Good, but could be more challenging
I got all the questions right first time- although I admit that some where educated guesses.
To test it more, I did it again and got 10 right and 2 wrong. In some cases you can guess a likely answer, which got me through.
Funnily enough, I tried a THIRD time and got 3 wrong, despite having some of the same questions so I will stop now!
-music limited and not interesting-needs more music
+art v good
+ animation good, though not interesting or at all ambitious
+ working OK - the walking man sometimes hesitates a second
It would be better if there was a leader board- the scores are pretty meaningless if you have no comparison.
The die should "fall down flat" when it reaches the number, it would look SO much better.
The walking man should look sad when he goes back some.
All in all a functional game, but not at all exciting -nothing memorable or interesting. Also, since you don't get told the right answers when you get them wrong you don't really learn anything.
Compared with my quizzes, which are so limited visually, this one looks SO professional, but the actual quiz is limited and uninspiring, with largely data/numbers questions which are dull.
Of course its great! I've never heard any of your work that I didn't enjoy. Great track for a movie.
My only slight criticism is that it is a little too like your Christmas track. Do I just say that its your style... hmm not sure.
Awesome, as ever! It has your recognisable style and conjures an image of an epic movie, so I hope it is one!
The ending made me yearn to know what happens next!
I wouldn't change a thing. As ever, I wish I could create submissions worthy of your music...
Maybe, one day!
Its very good! Maybe the one you chose is a BIT better, but this is a good track and deserves to be used. Perhaps it was unfortunate to give it this name. I would use it. Its got the right heroic sounds and style, the right length etc.
OK. Its kinda pretty and looks OK. I like the sunshine thing, although the shine on the side of the balloons does not correspond with it. The art is not very accurate, of course, with its wierd road and funny shaped balloons, but its stylised and cheerfulIt reminds me of seeing dozens of hot air balloons flying over London once many years ago. Some thing about the colours reminds me or stained glass windows.
Ok thank you
Looks good. Love the light effects etc.
Can't understand the pic, though. Falling seeds? Water? Wierd plants in the background?
To be honest, I don't think I would have identified the canine as a wolf, though I can't put my finger on what is wrong with it.
Good, not great
The light on the mushroom makes it look like shiney plastic- great 3D effect, but not realistic for any mushroom I know. Also, the gills underneath come together at a point just in front of the stipe (stalk) instead of around it.
I don't have a problem with the green background except that it is only behind it- the mushrooms need to be growing in and amongst something- if you put a few blades of grass in front and around it, the problems your critics refer to would IMO dissappear.
Try studying some real fungi and improving this one- it would be a good excercise- everyone here draws people and faces- be different!
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