She is cute and reminds me of a friend of mine. The dress is lovely. I would love to see my girlfriend in it!
I would love to see her animated- maybe just something simple like waving at "camera", or curtseying in that lovely dress. I would love to see her break into a little smile - she looks serious.
Alternatively, are those bars on the windows? Does her family keep her in the house away from strangers? Is she sad, lonely and in need of flowers and birds to cheer her up?
There- your work inspires me!
We must work together more. When Femme Fatale is finished I will send you all the rest of my stories to choose from.
Never throw away usable work- you never know when you might want it. I have all sort of bits and pieces and they are all going into one of my forthcoming games.