Score: 3

"not much too it"

submission: Skippy The Bouncing Cat

date: July 28, 2008

Didn't seem to do much. It looks like a little scrap you show your friends, not something I would put on NG, but hey- you got through anyway, so I guess people liked it enough.

Score: 6

"Pleasant viewing"

submission: Colours.

date: July 28, 2008

Smooth, well presented simple stuff. Not much too it and I would have got bored but you knew when to stop.

Score: 4

"so-so"

submission: Pie People: Ep.1

date: July 28, 2008

vaguely funny. suitably random. spelling not perfect.
Quiz OK

Score: 8

"Which collection do you have in mind?"

submission: weird lil cartoon

date: July 21, 2008

As usual, it has the Octo small and neat style. Well done on the awards. Look forward to 2nd episode. If you want the DS to review it before submission here, put it in the alphas or devientArt and PM me.
Best Wishes,
Ice

Score: 7

"Neat and smooth"

submission: Tetris-Sticks

date: July 21, 2008

Nice piece of work. Smooth action and good looking. good music.
No replay button tho!?!??

The music goes on with nothing happening on the screen which is not ideal. Even if it was just an animation loop it would be better.

I am a Tetris fan and the DS have a Tetris animation which maybe we will finish one day.

Score: 8

"Very Good"

submission: Intruder Returns

date: July 18, 2008

All looks and sounds very good. Great art, good animation.

Guy creeping up is too loud- he would be heard!

I prefer films with stories to submissions with nothing but action, it leaves me feeling that I don't care what happens.

Score: 8

"I liked it"

submission: Doctor A. Tom

date: July 14, 2008

The format was fun and so was the game. I gave up at level 14. I could not see myself ever getting past both the red and the green filter in just three shots!

Nice concept, action, sound, everything

Score: 8

"Very good"

submission: Project Eden

date: July 14, 2008

Good story, very good art, not very much animation fairly short.

Score: 8

"Of course its very good."

submission: The Lost Gift episode II

date: July 13, 2008

The art, the style, the story, the music, the angles etc are EXCELLANT.
However, the animation is limited and not very attractive. It isn't faulty, it just doesn't match up to the quality of the rest of it, with too much avoiding the difficult bits.

You should definately ask Tom Fulp for the facility to upload a larger file to give us the best you can offer. You need the voice acting. I am willing to voice act for you- I could narate it for you if you wish.

It seems that a number of people watched the second without seeing the first first. You MUST encourage them more, by putting a big button at the beginning of 2 taking them straight to 1 first and by writing your invitation in stronger language.

There are a few spelling errors which seem out of place in such professional work. PM me and I will hunt them down.

This series has GREAT potential, which is not being fully realised. If there is any way I can help you, please do ask.

Score: 7

"Yeah, its good"

submission: When I'm Running

date: July 8, 2008

Its all there and its OK. Making better animation of walking and running is the next key stage you need to do. Take a look back at the wolf and you will see what I mean.
Sorry, I only just spotted that Jimi and Hendrix are both spelt wrong. Never mind, its good, and part of a good, entertaining portfolio. I will get the DS to take a look.
Best Wishes,
Ice