IceDragon64's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Tristan's Area 51]

Previews belong in the alphas

This is just a scrap as it is. However much potential it has its not complete enough to count as an episode of anything.

First episodes should have enough introduction and explanation to start a series properly and an episode should seem like a worthwhile story in its own right.

[Newgrounds attack pt.1]

Got potential

+Nice idea, quite well done, but-
-very simimlar to AvA
-Needs sounds
-needs credits, including where yo got your inspiration
-who is the stick man? needs an intro or explanation. I would have thought it would make more sense to see Pbot come alive or something.
-Needs tidying up, such as the text when he speaks in the bubble made to fit properly.
-either tidy up the 'censoring' by using the exact right shade in neat blocks or prefereably lose it. Everyone leaves the names on when they do these things using the Portal as a background (its been done many times) and nobody minds- if anything its all promotion.
anyhow it was a bit of fun and I look forward to the next part- please make it longer its like an unfinished preview at present.

[The Virginia Tech Tragedy]

Ok

its pretty poor quality, but I protected it cos it was very quick off the mark. A bit of appropriate music would be nice and a photo etc. however perhaps we could just leave all that for the other ones that will be coming and give you some credit for getting the ball rolling fast on NG.
Its nice to prove, yet again, that NG isn't all nasty people saying mean and disrespectful things.
Best Wishes,
Ice

[Axis and Allies (4/16)]

OK

I generally hate unfinished stuff and bl@m most of them, so 5/10 is very high for me.

I like the humour and the expressions.

If this is the start of something big, you might begin with an intro, like maybe a map of a bit of text saying who is who and were they are.
"Date: January 1945 place: !@4%^&'sberg on the German border. The US forces are closing in on the @@@ and the crack £$£$ battalion lies in wait for them..."

AngryMouse14 responds:

That is a damn good suggestion. I could use the actual loader screen for the level from the game... Thanks much! I'll keep that in mind.

[Mentos Clock Short 4]

love the end!

I am going through all of the shorts. Its refreshing to see some different cc stuff.

Best Wishes to the Clocks from the Dragons & Spirits,
Ice

[Mentos Clock Short 9]

OK

I don't know which is worse, speakonia or those dull voices- lol

It was all there I suppose, a bit funny, kinda disjointed but OK

[DD : The collab]

OK

Don't know this- some fighting game I presume. Could have done with a bit of intro/explanation for those of us who don't know it.

Quite well put together and some nice timing with the music.

rebaz responds:

lol what is their too explain in a action flash movie? we wants the ACTION NO STORY PL0X

[GammaSpartans:StarryNight]

OK

I don't know what any of this is but it was a bit funny and the art n stuff was OK. Voices were good.

SwimtheSwan responds:

Go to bungie.net and download the 'Starry Night Trailer' in the halo 3 section and your will get this better.

-StS

[Allosaurus.gif]

Funny

Do more!

At first I thought it was just spam, until I realised that the gibberish words related to the gibberish being spoken in the song!

[Attempting Suicide]

Comic Ace!

You have reminded us that you don't have to have fantasticly realistic art or any such thing to make a good Flash comedy- although, saying that, the animation is actually pretty good.

+animation
+timing
+sound
+music choices-perfect

You probably could usefully insert a few more sounds but hey its great!

This is what NG was traditionally about.