Funny
sort out the little bits of white border at the end; otherwise its great!
Funny
sort out the little bits of white border at the end; otherwise its great!
OK
I guess it had something of the feel of Tankmen to it.
the flips the tank did were a nice touch.
where did you get the sounds from? Was the clapping from Windows?
i got my sounds from flashkit.com and findsounds.com and others were from dusty_gorilla
OMG! I am surprised
I thought the print button was some kind of joke, then my printer actually printed out a picture of Clocks- LOL
I thought the message was great, despite the fact that I am not American and I am cautious of the USA.
Best Wishes from Ice Dragon of the Dragons & Spirits
Dragons & Spirits are Ock neutral and vote only on merit
its a nice little parody
Carefull graphics that look like the original. Carefully observed style. Nice work.
Very good
Its rare for me to give a Speakonia more than 3. I tend to be a bit lenient on Ocks as it is part of your culture. 7/10 for sound in Speakonia is very rare and reflects the fact that the words are all audiable and the other sounds are good.
Very good parody comparable with Lord of the Clocks
Yours was actually funnier because of details like the rent a basket thing.
the humour was intelligent and ballenced in a potentialy controversial subject.
Thank you & best wishes,
IceDragon of the Dragons & Spirits
Very different to Baz!
Yes, this is a worthy project.
A COLLECTION of sketches, like I always told you!
I nice piece of collaberative effort, with good voice acting.
I most liked the Leroy Jenkins sketch.
Some of it didn't make sense to me.
Obviously you now have detail and background. If you are going for realistic stuff maybe you should find a proper walking sound now.
Spelling OK but not perfect.
You are obviously using the same symbols for all the men, try putting in a few simple details to make them look different, such as rank insignia- shoulder stripes etc.
since you cannot change a symbol without changing all the instances you need to anticipate such things and make a variety of similar images from one before you convert it to symbol. Sometimes you can overlay a symbol with an extra image, but since symbols come top in a layer, you would need to put it one layer up.
Best wishes - Ice
The most difficult to score/review yet
Oviously you are moving into a different league as your Flash skills develop more. I am glad you are being rewarded by better scores.
Personally I do think it is better overall and I gave it 3/5 for the first time! (sorry that means I lowered your score slightly, as usual!).
I personally don't see the appeal of making them longer, as other reviewers say, unless you put more jokes in them- but what do I know, your scores are better than mine!
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Best wishes,
IceDragon64 of the Dragons and Spirits
Improved graphics on Baz
I'm glad you have kept a lot of the style. It is what we expect. Baz actually walking properly was a bit of a surprise- I haven't done any real walking yet for NG.
its funny, of course.
Hello, its me again!
I checked to see if you had done more and found two!
+funny
+like a couple of the effects- the legs carry on, which is kinda sick/funny and the wizzing trees looked good- it makes up for the otherwise crappy/basic graphics
As I said before I would prefer these little shorts in a group of three or four per submission. I look forward to your big movie you talk of, your stuff is funny. If you want to pm me when you submit it I will let the gang know and we will all have look.
Looks good
way ahead of me in graphics, although walking action still needs work. If you can crack that it will be easily up in the 8/10 level for me.
I like the rear view mirror effect.
spelling etc:
earth/Earth
Newyork/New York
thank you, but the walking really was supposed to be robotic like that. That character after all was a robot as shown when it went to X-Ray mode.
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