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IceDragon64

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Ok

weird, a bit funny, simple animation, but definately worth an ordinary 2/5 protect.

It had a but of originality in idea and humour.

Needs a sezure warning in the authors notes.

don't you think there should be a button to click for seizure.
warning?
Needs credit for music and proper buy button in the bit where you submit the movie.

As a submision, I think its all right...

Good art, skillful if simple animation. smooth.

Politically I think its just as over-simple as the alternative you are against. Besides, which you seem to have forgotten that this is an international website and that thousands of millions of people would think that seeing the US flag hoisted on their land- me included- was a nightmare.

There ARE countries who do not have an army, believe it or not.

3Dmadness responds:

no one out there will attack these harmless countries because if they do then the UN will come will come in with WEAPONS and stop them

This is fun!

the opposite of a video for sound.
Do more make the series.
Take the same time over them as you did with this and I will support it.

wierd- some of the lip movement really looked like they were saying what you said!

I very rarely literally laugh out loud at flash and I did for just a moment when the penguin came on.

I am the Saviour!

I don't get this very often and I always review when I do- so its a bit embarrassing, since I only voted 2/5.
However, let me tell you my thoughts.
I have seen an awful lot of these Madness type things and I think we are all fed up with them. You now have the chance to make the sequel and get it protected- most sequels do. PLEASE make it original. Somehow give the characters some personality.
Zoom in and show a close-up, show thoughts or something.
Take your time on backgrounds and maybe even put in some subtle humour.
Its OK, but now is your chance to make something GOOD. Remember, if you make a series everyone will look back on this one so take the reviews and make this one better as well.
Look at the timing of the action in this one. I understand that the final fight scene was slo-mo but this think about having people just stand and be shot is so crap. at least show a little movement in them- raising thier guns- taking aim maybe shooting and missing.
Best wishes,
Ice

Like most collabs...

the few scraps of talent were lost in the dross.

the duck thing was almost up to keeping.

I do have a sense of humour and I think it was a fun idea, but please don't keep doing this. 5 frames @ 120 lol.

Orangebeef responds:

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Please do finish this

At least bring it to a neat end at 90 seconds or something

It sgood stuff. I saw a lot of characters I know in there!

I don't suppose it was meant to have any kind of story, was it?

The quality button in the corner spoilt the movie rather- please tone it down or something.

Messy, unfinished.

Why do the SS want to submit something which actually SAYS it isn't finished?
The creature at the end just stands still while the voice carries on talking incomprehensible crap.

This does not deserve to get through judgement-
-backgrounds
-sound quality
-graphics
but thanks to the SS it might.
As I have said before, I admire your effort, but I don't see the point.
Having said all that, it wasn't the same without a Dailytoon to ignore!
Best wishes anyway!
IceDragon64 of the Dragons &Spirits

Fantastic Art, but not much of a Flash

Its OK but not yet great.

Its got great visual characters- you could make so much of this. It could be a NewGrounds hit.

These guys could be so funny with a bit of character developed in them.

I can hardly put my finger on when to go with this, but please do work on it. Brainstom woth your frineds, get as much feedback as you can.
As it is it doesn't have real story and timing of the movement is dull, but go for it.

Chizem responds:

I promise you that i will make more and they will be better than this, because i will have more time, thanks.

Quite good, got potential

+good animation
+OK graphics
+Good story
+funny

-needs explanation- intro or info button afterwards eg. why wee these people in this position- not supposed to kill each other- who were they supposed to kill. Also , what does the titile mean? If this is quoted from a book or somehting you need to say so.
-sound levels need tweeking, esp the commi coming up the hill.

-Replay button and full credits, with music would make it into a full movie.

A scene zooming in for a close-up on one of the groups would be very good. It seems ambitious, but its the next level of animation and story telling and would guarentee a higher score.

this is good material, please work on it- then do more!

Was in the Dragon & Spirit Alliance. My DS Halloween & Christmas Quizzes are in the 2006 Collections. I was the main organiser on Wikigrounds, though I don't spend much time either there or here these days. I was a writer in the Monthly Writing and VACcom

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