Quite good, got potential
+good animation
+OK graphics
+Good story
+funny
-needs explanation- intro or info button afterwards eg. why wee these people in this position- not supposed to kill each other- who were they supposed to kill. Also , what does the titile mean? If this is quoted from a book or somehting you need to say so.
-sound levels need tweeking, esp the commi coming up the hill.
-Replay button and full credits, with music would make it into a full movie.
A scene zooming in for a close-up on one of the groups would be very good. It seems ambitious, but its the next level of animation and story telling and would guarentee a higher score.
this is good material, please work on it- then do more!