Excellant start.
Yes, please! I could become a serious FRV Polaris Fan!
I would seriously say this is the first time I have ever seen Flash used to actually look real, rather than as a cartoon representation.
As it stands, this is first rate and I couldn't seriously fault it.
However, you can only get so far without going into the realms of animals/people/walking/lip sync etc. I think storywise this is about as far as it goes. Already I think not everyone will have followed the story clearly. Your real test comes next...
for what its worth, if we can help you, PM me. I am confident that the Dragons & Spirits will rally behind such an impressive start.
There is nothing wrong with the sounds you used, so far, but this movie is major league- you will have to be prepared to take the plunge and let the story dictate the images/animation/sounds in future, not your patience, as you have more or less admitted.
Top flight movies require detailed credits end to end attention to detail- if you can't do it, get help thats what we are here for!
THIS MOVIE IS WORTH IT!
Best Wishes, Ice Dragon of the Dragons & Spirits