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Nice stuff.

I look forward to v2.

I don't like the music, but thats just a personal taste thing. I liked all the images. Naturally, as a Dragon/Spirit I am biased. sorry I was a bit harsh on the other thing, I do look forward to v2.
Do, please take your time and make it the best you can.
If you care to pm me ( I will forget) when v2 is out I will give them both a detailed review and let the other Dragons & Spirits know.
Best wishes,
Ice

heather-lanham responds:

v.2 will have classical or misc. music, and thanks for the reveiw,

(I'm partial to electricity myself)

I'll PM you when v.2 comes out.

It has potential but...

please use the alpha for test submissions.

heather-lanham responds:

alpha? I thought this is a decent flash, so I thought I would post it, and then update the file to v.2 when v.2 is done. v.2's release date has been bumped up, and hopefully I'll be able to post it today.

Very good

+entertaining
+beautiful naration, its very hard work to get it just right.
+loved the humorous observation of the spelling etc.

-I thought the penises (peni?) were unneccsary and spoilt it. The actions meant that it is NOT what I consider suitable for all audiences. If I had seen some of it, then shown it to my mum I would be a very unhappy bunny- take my point?
-The buttons were pointless, there were no stops, so I went the first one and it played all through.

Excellant start.

Yes, please! I could become a serious FRV Polaris Fan!
I would seriously say this is the first time I have ever seen Flash used to actually look real, rather than as a cartoon representation.
As it stands, this is first rate and I couldn't seriously fault it.
However, you can only get so far without going into the realms of animals/people/walking/lip sync etc. I think storywise this is about as far as it goes. Already I think not everyone will have followed the story clearly. Your real test comes next...

for what its worth, if we can help you, PM me. I am confident that the Dragons & Spirits will rally behind such an impressive start.
There is nothing wrong with the sounds you used, so far, but this movie is major league- you will have to be prepared to take the plunge and let the story dictate the images/animation/sounds in future, not your patience, as you have more or less admitted.
Top flight movies require detailed credits end to end attention to detail- if you can't do it, get help thats what we are here for!
THIS MOVIE IS WORTH IT!
Best Wishes, Ice Dragon of the Dragons & Spirits

Borderline- please improve

Most of the world hasn't seen the directors cut, so you probably won't get the score you are hoping for.

Needs tidying up, with a proper end, replay button and credits.

I found some of the sound hard to hear

Sit down with some of your friends and pinpoint a few simple ways to improve this, it has some skill and potential.

Very good but...

clearly could be better.

+good graphics, I liked the tiny close-ups

-needs proper credits
-ending very abrupt

Good, but not no.1

-this madness stuff is getting SO samey, besides, which timing of men just standing there, waiting to be killed, with guns in their hands is lame.

+However, there were details of thought and humour in there.
+there is a thread of story going through the series.

I assume once it has been judged by its post-judgement views the score will settle down to something more realistic. At present it has been inflated by stat whores fifening it through judgement. It is not in the same league as There She Is or Bracknwood.

I didn't even like the music...

I don't like such languge in the title.
No matter how they rate the music, we all see the title.

It has nothing to it really- no real animation no length interest etc.

Was in the Dragon & Spirit Alliance. My DS Halloween & Christmas Quizzes are in the 2006 Collections. I was the main organiser on Wikigrounds, though I don't spend much time either there or here these days. I was a writer in the Monthly Writing and VACcom

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