Not for me
The art/animation is very basic and the song is limited and not very musical. I hardly see your 'war-torn village' in the one building.
Not for me
The art/animation is very basic and the song is limited and not very musical. I hardly see your 'war-torn village' in the one building.
All OK
a bit funny. I don't understand why it jumped to and from a game. Apparently theres some kind of in joke in there.
sound/music good. art/animation so-so
If you paid a BIT of attention, it has to do with what they are talking about. This flash wasn't meant to be good, it was meant to be funny and relevant to those who play Team Fortress 2.
Obviously you aren't one of them. LOL!
voices a bit lame
Otherwise OK.
They sound faint and nondescript.
Very good
It looks good and it all works well and the music is fine.
the story drags on a bit, it seems stretched out to fit the song. We got the idea of him missing her etc...
Then, when I was a bit bored and fed up, the end came and it was worth it!
Thanks
Thanks for your comments, IceDragon64.
In fact, this is a short movie and a videoclip for the Metropol band at the same time. ;-)
dissapointing
You have the skills, but this just seems pointless. Hug what? scribbles?
Nice music.
predictable, but funny
and SO true.
All well written, drawn and animated. Sounds fine too.
Do I hate you?
No, I can't hate you, I am a Dragon/spirit, but its close. Its is SO good up to THAT point. You could blow away 99 % of all Crew movies with this thing if you worked on it to the end. Collaborate, get help, sell your soul, beg- Do what it takes.
Lock Legion! For crying out loud - talk to him.
Finish properly and resubmit PLEASE!!!
If you don't have a proper ending and you want to talk story, talk to me, I am a published writer. If you want help from our tiny crew, we will help if we can.
Finish this properly, THEN retire if you must. We get the joke, but don't leave us hanging here.
Best Wishes to all Locks from the Dragons & Spirits anyway :) !
Was in the Dragon & Spirit Alliance. My DS Halloween & Christmas Quizzes are in the 2006 Collections. I was the main organiser on Wikigrounds, though I don't spend much time either there or here these days. I was a writer in the Monthly Writing and VACcom
Age 60, Male
Writer
London, UK
Joined on 9/29/05