It is a clear message, well stated in a very clear voice, with clear images.
I would rate it higher if it had some kind of references and if it was a little more international in its outlook.
It is a clear message, well stated in a very clear voice, with clear images.
I would rate it higher if it had some kind of references and if it was a little more international in its outlook.
It is interesting and thought provoking. The speech is very good, well spoken and very clear. The art/animation is good and clear, but rather repetative.
However, you have entirely written and presented it for the US market, neglecting the fact that Newgrounds is an INTERNATIONAL website. I don't think other countries, have a banking arrangement quite like yours, so I think this in not entirely true for a high proportion of your viewers.
I totally agree with sekru- If you watch the Portal, hoping to be entertained and see something new worth watching it is frustrating to see nothing but test clips. Please stop promising the proper movie while submitting stuff like this and FINISH ONE. You can even contact me directly and ask and I will give you a full and fair review when you make a worthwhile full submission- I am sure sekru would do the same :)
Animation and sound all good. Lots of good effects. Lots of A v A stuff we know well and more. The only problem for me is unlike AvA I didn't really understand the story.
Thanks for the feedback! Ima try to improve my upcoming animations
Its so-so, but there is not much to it, so I don't think we want to keep it. Come back with entertaining and finished content and we will review it fully.
Oh YES! I have just watched a couple of absolutely pointless videos where the animation did virtually nothing and added nothing to the music.
SO, I come here and see a video that expresses what the song is about with care and skill. Nothing I would change. Thank you; I am entertained.
Art OK, sound OK, dancing Ok, but so little to it I almost blammed it. Almost, but meh, its OK.
Grim, isn't it? The images, animation and sound are all good. It captures the old-time atmosphere of Kafka well.
I personally don't like the wibbly wobbly thing.
It was OK. You have created quite entertaining characters and the music and voices have an old-fashioned cartoon appeal.
However, to be honest I replayed it but still don't understand what happened on the doorstep!
SO the red cat asks her out, then the young cat buts in and says something I can't hear, then the girl gets hit by a baseball, then she hits the red cat, who didn't do anything ? Huh?
Yeah tbh looking back on this, I completely see what you’re talking about. This short was just weird and confusing.
Half the movie is your very slow pre-thingy. There is almost nothing to it. Sound, colour, length credits... try again.
Was in the Dragon & Spirit Alliance. My DS Halloween & Christmas Quizzes are in the 2006 Collections. I am the main organiser on Wikigrounds, though I don't spend much time either there or here these days. I am a writer in the Monthly Writing and VACcomps
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