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Your voice usually sounds absolutely like a TV advert- sharp, not hesitant and to the point. Although that gets the basic message across most clearly, in this instance, where you allowed a little more personality to slip through, I preferred it and it made an otherwise simple message more appealing.

Keep going, the messages are worthwhile.

As usual for you, the video quality is good enough, if a bit repetative and unoriginal. The voice and message is very clear.

I think you should have some kind of credits/references.

As for the message, I AGREE except that the problem isn't coaching, it is as you half-said LIFE coaching and the title of the submission should have been that.

When I think that millions of people strive hard for their whole lives to be the BEST sportperson or something, competing against everybody else who has been told that they CAN be the best in the world, it seems obvious that most people CANNOT just be everything they want to be !

Judging it as a submission :
It is very simple but it works and it is clear enough, it has a message and although it is crude, this is NG, so it ticks the basic boxes.

I dislike Mr Trump, but I think this is just rude and polarising. This kind of thing just alienates people who are not your enemy. You give the impression that you and your side are no better, just dick scribblers.

It is not even in any sense true. Mr Trump is not particularly cowardly- he could live a totally relaxed life without making himself a target if he wished; plus those children seem to me to be totally his.

It is a clear message, well stated in a very clear voice, with clear images.

I would rate it higher if it had some kind of references and if it was a little more international in its outlook.

It is interesting and thought provoking. The speech is very good, well spoken and very clear. The art/animation is good and clear, but rather repetative.

However, you have entirely written and presented it for the US market, neglecting the fact that Newgrounds is an INTERNATIONAL website. I don't think other countries, have a banking arrangement quite like yours, so I think this in not entirely true for a high proportion of your viewers.

I totally agree with sekru- If you watch the Portal, hoping to be entertained and see something new worth watching it is frustrating to see nothing but test clips. Please stop promising the proper movie while submitting stuff like this and FINISH ONE. You can even contact me directly and ask and I will give you a full and fair review when you make a worthwhile full submission- I am sure sekru would do the same :)

Animation and sound all good. Lots of good effects. Lots of A v A stuff we know well and more. The only problem for me is unlike AvA I didn't really understand the story.

Utrilixz responds:

Thanks for the feedback! Ima try to improve my upcoming animations

Its so-so, but there is not much to it, so I don't think we want to keep it. Come back with entertaining and finished content and we will review it fully.

Oh YES! I have just watched a couple of absolutely pointless videos where the animation did virtually nothing and added nothing to the music.
SO, I come here and see a video that expresses what the song is about with care and skill. Nothing I would change. Thank you; I am entertained.

Art OK, sound OK, dancing Ok, but so little to it I almost blammed it. Almost, but meh, its OK.

Was in the Dragon & Spirit Alliance. My DS Halloween & Christmas Quizzes are in the 2006 Collections. I was the main organiser on Wikigrounds, though I don't spend much time either there or here these days. I was a writer in the Monthly Writing and VACcom

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