Fantastic Art, but not much of a Flash
Its OK but not yet great.
Its got great visual characters- you could make so much of this. It could be a NewGrounds hit.
These guys could be so funny with a bit of character developed in them.
I can hardly put my finger on when to go with this, but please do work on it. Brainstom woth your frineds, get as much feedback as you can.
As it is it doesn't have real story and timing of the movement is dull, but go for it.