OK but not great
I didnt really understand it. I couldnt hear what the red creature/person was saying. It didn't make much sense.
However the art was good, unlike so many flash here so I passed it.
OK but not great
I didnt really understand it. I couldnt hear what the red creature/person was saying. It didn't make much sense.
However the art was good, unlike so many flash here so I passed it.
The red creature is supposed to be "Devil Doll" from a popular shockwave cartoon from a long time ago. I wanted to kill him. It doesn't matter what he was saying. :P
Good stuff
Sherbert stuff is going well. I feel you are on the edge of great things with this. Nice sound, art and animation. I wouldn't change it.
Thanks for the review! Glad you like it!
Good
+Good art
+good animation
+funny- some nice ideas in there
I felt the mice were rather lame- they didn't really DO much they were a bit of a cop out- really just copy the picture, then dont bother.
its good, though, I enjoyed it. the music and the internet!
Go and watch some classic cartoons critically. Study how they get their laughs, the sounds and music blend etc. make them even better.
Poor Sherbert, he is just doing his job but Tom doesn't look pleased.
You have the basic abililty and with the added support of Sherbert fans you can realy clean up.
Very good
+Good Art
+Good sound
+Good voice
+good message
I wouldn't change it
Do more flash!
Best of luck in the pagent,
Ice
;.; You're awesome, thanks!
Good, funny
I wouldn't say it was unfinished cogwheel brain explosion is an ending, however it is true one could do more with it.
+art good
+animation good
+sounds funny!
+idea/story funny
Unless you wanted to build on it, I wouldn't change it.
Very mixed
+Proper story
+ Some good sounds and voices
+ Some OK art and animation
-Some poor sounds
-Artwise its some good pics mixed with scribble
You need to study the final result over and over before submitting- preferably with honest reviews by friends first.
Storywise I think you are assuming a lot of people's ability to understand what is going on. Again, talk it through with people who DON'T already know about this series.
This has considerable potential- please make it the best you can.
Best wishes,
Ice
Ice
Fun, funny
Liked it. It had the CC charm and silly style I have grown fond of.
I liked the Mars bar joke and the selection of music.
Didn't like the loop at the end much, though, it looks lousy, seeing the spaceship fall back each time.
Yeah I got lazy with the spaceship =3
Good but mixed
Art/animation Mixed quality
3D angles/ perspective mixed up but good effort
Ideas Good
Text not very good english
Don't like the title. Sh1tty is spelt thus anyway
Music options good
Yes I don't like the titel either. If you have a better one? ;)
And yes I am dislectic. ;'(
But what do you mean with mixed quality?
OK, quite funny
simple but effective
Speek/speak.
Women!
This is SO right! You can't win! Yeah! just like that!
Beautifully done.
Good art
Good animation
Good sound
Its all good
I wouldn't change it!
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