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[Learn about gullotines!]

Change The Spelling of the title NOW!

-Ngers can be so fickle- Gullotine/Guillotine.
-did you mean ' which is foot instead of '' which means inch?
-Can't read the information without zooming in, which is not really right.

Since it really isn't right at present some people might bl@m it, just to make you sort it out. Authors are notorious for not bothering otherwise. However, I passed it, so please sort it!

However, apart from that its a neat little documentary thing. good art, good sound, good info.

How about adding another info button for more info on decapitation? If you are up for it, PM me and I will give you a couple of interesting links.
Best Wishes
Ice

funsquares responds:

Actually, this began as a blueprint for a school project, a model i was going to create. The model was in inches, and i just forgot to change the measurements in the current form.
----thanks for the input, i will change the text

---Funsquares

[WordScramblesCountries.94]

Its good, I'm crap!

I tried all three and I got a high of 86 on easy, 66 on med, 65 on hard. Why did you remove the places you removed?- you've taken away my brother's house in the Caribbean! Does Hong Kong still count as a country or whatever?
Best Wishes,
Ice

LuckyLollipopLad responds:

As I mentioned via PM, I'll probably change the list again for the next version, to be a more accurate list of actual 'countries'.

Thanks for the feedback with your scores and also all the help you've given throughout!

[The Expert's Guide - NG 2]

you never told me!

To be honest I can't see much changed. Its good, of course. The little pictures of the portal awards are rather too dark against a dark background, otherwise its OK.
Have you seen my tut yet?
Ice

highwatermark responds:

OK, I'll PM you soon.

[Photoshop Tutorialab beta]

Put tests in the alphas, I do.

I dont want to see scraps. If all you wanted to do was test the preloaders etc there are plenty of places you could do that. get a DA acct, for example.

Zeppekk responds:

I HAVE a DeviantArt account, www.zeppekk.deviantart.com

And besides, although i didn't expect it, this wasn't blammed.

[Pong-o-Matic]

sorry, pal, its glitched

I did easy and it was fine but when I tried to play medium it just flickered each time and told me in about three seconds I had won or lost, like it played an almost instant game?!?!?!

Otherwise it looks OK. I wouldnt give it much for style cos its just Pong, but if it worked I would protect it cos it looks pretty good and its got levels.

[Dress Up Doll]

Barely passed

+choice good
+art good

-no sound
-no extras. Dressups are two a penny on NG and many are blammed. I passed it for the good art but we usualy expect some backgrounds, sound, movie clips etc.

-eyes higher layer than hair and glasses- the fact that you spent a limited time on the level of layers shows.

[ActionScript Explained #1]

OK tut

Theres loads of tuts and I don't pass them unless they have something, which I think this has.

However it could do with tidying up. As you say it has a lot of typos- with tuts its got to be right, to keep peoples confidence. Always get someone to view your work before you post it.
I don't use much AS so I'm not much of a judge, but it looks OK as far as I can see.

If you want people to join your Productions then put in a link where your note is.

thequackattack responds:

yes, I will for sure tidy it up! I'm glad you liked it. Thank you for the helpful and honest review!

[Bubble Tanks]

its fun, its interesting

Its one of those quite simple, but challenging games. Neat tidy, arm-achingly addictive. I might play it again.

[Character maker!]

Ok but limited

+art OK
-animation None
+interactivity OK
-Interest, limited
+sound- nice music, refreshingly different to usual NG, but nothing else.
Theres noting wrong with it- it works OK etc. however I am surprised at how well it has done. Dressups are two-a-penny here and with no special options/features at all it is nothing special.

Upgrades to this kind of thing are:

Music options
Music on/off buttons
Change of scene behind character
More characters to dress up
Movie clip items
buttons to More Info/credits
button to NG Dressup Collection
sounds on buttons

[Dress Up Logan]

I've blammed a lot of dressup games...

Which are absolutely plain. Yours just scrapes through becuase it has an option to change the background colour. Just.

More options, with some picture bacgrounds and some movie clips would be much better. I'm sure Logan would like to see himself in a Spidey outfit somewhere exciting, wouldn't he?
Best Wishes,
Ice