Score: 7

"Nice and smooth"

submission: Stop & Stare...

date: June 27, 2008

Nice style, content, message. Hope Carly is OK now.

Score: 5

"not bad"

submission: Line Rider

date: March 11, 2008

it works and its mildly funny. The sound is quite good, well timed etc.

This kind of keeps dying parody is very familiar here on NG, but thats OK, people like it. The moments of 3D angle give you the fifth star.

Lots of things you can do to improve it:
more colour
more length
link to info about the game.
go into NG tutorials collection and learn buttons, they are easy.
Go into my Art tutorial if you want some ideas on how to step up a little in art, including buttons and backgrounds.

Score: 3

"Not too bad, but..."

submission: Where Are The Stars? v2

date: February 20, 2008

pretty crude and basic. It needs sound badly. Very little gets through judgement here without any sound at all. just a simple loop of music would be passable.
a bit of real animation, as opposed to having a few characters shift about, would help.

Score: 7

"Looked good, worked well"

submission: Money (Thats what i want)

date: February 19, 2008

You might add a few sparkles to the piles of coins. Also, maybe credit the music within the flash, including the second version which is in the very end.

Score: 9

"Excellant"

submission: Valhalla Knights 2

date: February 19, 2008

Background art exceptional. Other art very good, sound good, story very good.
Some of the animation is not quite as good as the rest, buyt generally its all great.

I didn't like the 'humourous' face transformation when he found the girl- I assume that is one of these anime rituals, but its WAY out of place in this otherwise serious styled animation

Score: 8

"So far, its my favourite"

submission: (2004) Glass of water

date: February 18, 2008

I've seen a fair few Knox/Klay and I come back to this one. Your twisted thought, logic is just so weird.
I love the laughing at the badge and the whole dying in a glass of water thing.

Score: 4

"Needs sound, badly"

submission: How airsoft guns work

date: February 17, 2008

Otherwise OK. More info would be good.

Score: 3

"Not too bad"

submission: Not Anymore.....

date: February 17, 2008

It s got most of the basics- sound, animation, background etc. However, it is mostly of poor quality and there isn't much to it.

The sound is very rough and hard to hear. You need to practice and redo voices until they are clearer.

The intro thing is very basic, b/w stickmen is SO overdone and common.

I think you have the beginnings of something good, but you are not, in my opinion, ready for submitting to NG.
Please do work on it.

Score: 7

"Some nice touches"

submission: The Weapon Collab

date: February 16, 2008

I 'm not much into stickmen and guns, but I liked the bits of humour and the info.

Score: 8

"Im going through them- best so far"

submission: On The Moon (episode 3)

date: February 12, 2008

Carapace diagram tipped the balance into 4/5 for me.